All Comments on 'The Servicemen's Club'

Alice is about 20 years too old in this story for it to be very erotic.....

Great story so far I'm looking forward to the next part.

Great story so far I'm looking forward to the next part.

well written, very nice I liked it.... waiting for the nect chapter

i think it's coming along great, I'v read some of your other stories and have had mixed views, so don't loose focus

and keep doing a good job. can't wait for next chapter

Have the husband look between his legs. Balls still there? Okay, now as long as they stay there and he doesn't develop an uncontrollable urge to drink another man's sperm (even though he probably has already), I think that most readers will enjoy this story.

Have the husband remember his anger and the feeling of betrayal over her cheating when she gets weepy. Remember, she is cheating on him, verbally abusing him, not doing all of this for him but for another man (men). Her fucking the husband is probably her way to ease her guilt. It isn't because she loves him. She wouldn't treat him this way if she loved him.

Very erotic story , but would much prefer to see thw final episode of "The Loving Husband" before you start on a new suspense filled story. Are you going to start these excellant stories and then leave us hanging with no final episode?

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