All Comments on 'The Sex Shop'

Excellent

great story

Sammybabe awesome story. Bet you wish that was you. Please continue

Good read. I would have preferred he pull out and cum all over her big tits. But not bad. Keep writing.

Pretty hot, but the jumping between 1st and 3rd person was really annoying and disrupted the flow.

Very nice!🌹

Great Story, thank you for sharing.

Very nice story. It gets really exciting in some parts.

I think sticking with the first person narrator would have made it far hotter.

Seeing and knowing only what the girl is seeing herself adds to the danger and anticipation in the reader 's mind.

Good job for a debutante!

Jo

Hot as Hell. Hope there a chapter 2. Five stars.

Part 2 is needed where Harry blackmails this girl & ultimately these 2 fall in love

Yay, someone else with this fantasy!

Great premise.

Didn't deliver, at least not for me.

Rushed. Coarse. Lacks real eroticism.

Two stars.

Great work .kept me rock hard

Why is the guy fat and not fit like old but fit with a big dick

Another great story Sammy. You are quite the author. Better than the first one i read. It was intense

Fantastic story! Would love to work with you, maybe a collab? I'm on Deviantart TheDudeMan007 :)

Amazing Story!!!! Loved the setup and one should know the risk of entering these stores!! This had me hard from the beginning. Great writing and please keep at it!!

Great story Sammy loved it

Great writing of a short sex story. Tension and detailed sex, please write more!

Like your style Sammy. Keep writing!

Wow Sammy, an amazing story. So real and so great a description. I loved it all and am quite sure I am going to love part 2. Thanks for the good work

Well done. Your style made me feel like a voyeur watching the action live. I hope she visits again to try out some other toys. Or to be Harry's toy.

Would have loved to have visited that shop at the right time.

Great writing, hope to see more soon.

Good story! I would love to find the toys for my own use! The Sex Store could be such a good location for more chapters or scenarios. Keep writing!

Great story.

I dont like at all!!

Love this story! I was hard and stroking just thinking of that summer dress and those big tits! Surprised I didn't explode before I finished . . ready for Pt. 02.

It would be hot to see those big tits used like that! Great stuff. Thanks so much!

Okay, good premise but your writing style made me crazy. Switching between first person to third person POV was rough. Find a voice.

Lusty tale! I love babes with big tits.

very sexy story and stroking myself throughout... can't wait for more!

I would stick to either first or third person, but overall it was pretty fucking hot. I didn't reach orgasm, but I think part 2 will push me over the edge ;)

Loved the plot and sex but badly written. Story didn’t flow naturally

love it sammy!!

sorry i missed you in chat... would like to 're-enact' this or something similar!

Loved it. so sweet and innocent to start lol and then...well. great descriptions and so easy to follow and believe it all. I will work on part 2 when i get a chance

Loved the sexshop story part 1 Such great descriptions and so hot . Fun to read and imagine. will red more soon. keep up the good work

fucking perfect ,marry me

Sammy, you got me tingling. I can't wait to read more stories.

Keep writing Sammy, you got my imagination into overdrive, and more! 😉

Hot!