by cultofstrawberry
Very enjoyable, engages the reader quickly. Novel ideas, interesting sci-fi and lots of ideas to develop.
To continue. Looking forward to then next chapter.
Great story so far
Fun, and well written stories. Five stars for both chapters! Hope you continue because we got to meet the Queen, just to see how horny she is.
I love the story line, and the characters. That being said, there are more than a few grammar and spelling errors, Still a solid 5. Keep up the good work.
Please continue the story. 5* I look forward to more chapters. Thanks for your time and efforts.
I hope she abducts him and makes him a temple sacrifice!
This is so amazing we need more of this story line! I've resd a lot of your stuff and its all amazing but this one needs just plain out more stuff because wow.
You really need to add to this story and expand upon it, it's a good story line and could be made into a major series.