All Comments on 'The Shine'

Tragically, I made a comment in error on your chapter 10 of oblivion. You politely corrected me. I am such a fan of your work. All I can say that in my humble opinion, this story could be some of the best work I ever read on this site. I would say more, but I’m reading the story over for a third time. Great, great work.

ButteredCrumpet and I had so much fun working on this together Servemist, I’m very happy to know you’re enjoying it enough to reread. (Twice! We did try and pack it with fun details, I hope those efforts are paying off.)

Thoroughly enjoyed this longer collaboration. The more measured start sets the stage nicely for perfectly paced, hard-to-match sexual intensity — collaboratively creative erotica. Even Dani’s morning after was a nicely crafted mix of “you can just imagine” humor with erotic reflections on the wild night before. A credit to you both that your two collaborations are distinctly different from one another in length, style, pace and character development, yet both feature highly erotic, graphically detailed scenes, both uniquely different yet each truly immersive — the reader can not help but be drawn into the sexually riveting action. Both of you write in distinctively creative styles. I am wrapped up in the visual artistry and character detail of the “Oblivion and Doubt” series as well as “The Stronger Girl” and captivated by how one can weave so well so much sensual lust into such a short piece as “Call Me” and “One Bed”. Look forward to more whether working together or alone. Again, 5 stars to each of you. Thanks for sharing.

Super hot story! Pushed all the right buttons for me! I'll definitely check out the rest of your writing!

SNS, you took the words out of mouth. I had so much fun writing this with you.

No matter how many times I've re-read this it hasn't got old yet!!! I love the level of detail we achieved with this story.

Migbird, thank you for your kind words. I'm really glad that you have been enjoying the collaborations SNS & I have been working on recently. There's a few more ideas in the pipeline as I've been having so much writing with SNS.

I hope that as a partnership we can keep putting out stories that people enjoy.

Servemist, it is awesome to see you're reading this multiple times and that you've enjoyed it so much!

xxxshacoxxx, I'm glad this one pushed the right buttons for you. I hope that you enjoy the rest of SiteNonSite's back catalogue. Mine isn't as expansive, but there's always room for more.

You write so well...and this story was great.

“The more measured start” nicely points to something that troubles me about both the first story of The Stronger Girl and the first story of Obsession And Doubt. I’m very glad to hear this change registers Migbird, and very much think it’s do with my collaboration with ButteredCrumpet.

I very much enjoyed this as a kind of double-nostalgia piece, of characters in (an already past era of) Williamsburg pining for an earlier Downtown scene they missed (Warhol, Edie, Velvet Underground…) but also ButteredCrumpet and I indulging our nostalgia for both those eras.

Clearly we are both enjoying and feeding off our collaboration, and plan to continue. Thanks so much for your encouraging feedback. (You too xxxshacoxx and Anon.) It’s wonderful to know this is making for pleasurable reading.

Mind blowing, really good, you both can write so well, thanks will now read more of your previous work.

This was the final story for me and what a wonderful finish. Not quite my thing but i must admit I couldn't stop reading. Now I wait for the next collaboration or solo effort from NSN and I am on to BC's stories next. Thank you for so much entertainment, and rich and exciting characters and stories.

The thing I’ve discovered as I’ve written porn, Saragal, is that I travel into territory I wouldn’t otherwise, my characters are into things that are decidedly not my thing. But like having a lover with a fetish, their thing becomes exciting for me. This was my first true collaboration with ButteredCrumpet - where we’re weren’t working on MY story, but instead building one of our own from the ground up. I took a lot of pleasure in pushing her boundaries and mine. I also took a perverse pleasure in the challenge of making a tiny penis sexy. I’m glad to know the story held you even though it wasn’t your thing, and hope that you will enjoy BC’s stories as much as I do.

Hot as hell, wryly funny, extremely well-written, and wall-to-wall Velvets/Lou/Factory references. This is the perfect story.

So glad you enjoyed the vibe EarlyMorningLight, it was great fun to write. In the spirit of Halloween we tried to get really twisted. The downtown scene through the lens of Williamsburg got us there, I’m so glad it translates, and especially glad to know the humor lands.

The ass play is not my thing, but this was still good!