All Comments on 'The Shopkeeper'

Nice story line and sounds like it will build up to lots more antics ahead..

Hot! Loved it ;)

Loved it.

great - very chatty and enticing - held my attention all the way. Can't wait for what happens next

Lovely story. I can't believe it was your first. Very well written. Looking forward to more! :)

well written,nluv build up to sex.

Excellent.

Chapter 2 please.

This is your first story??

It is soooo well written. Amazing!

Really hot. I’ve been tingling reading this story.

really enjoyed your story. I look forward to more!

A real good first story and a nice setup for chapter 2.

I thorughly enjoyed it, to say at least...😁 But i wonder whether it was intended to mention the hubby so many times or not. I have some strange feelings reading about the MC's husband and her being ready to jump on the other girl's bones without further ado... Maybe it's just me, cause i've came here for girls and only girls though! Anyway, it's been great and i'll just pretend that there was no hubby for my own sake (that's it, if you won't collaborate with the matter in the next chapters;) ). 'You've got a talent, please continue making all of us wet and happy!

Great story. I loved it. Hope there will be another chapter.