All Comments on 'The Shower'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 18 years ago
Excellent start

Now for the rest of the story please. You have the characters right and also have the situation set up well. The rest needs to be told.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 15 years ago
luvd it

Pleeez finish dis....its gud

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