All Comments on 'The Shower'

What a beautiful and engrossing tale...I loved this depiction of a shower and the events of this morning...especially real, vibrant and very well written. The steam in this shower will not soon clear...your expression of passion is beautiful...

Your writing says it all...I can sense the passion, can feel the emotion...please tell us what he does when he gets you back to bed...you need release and I can sense that he can bring it out of you...tell us!