All Comments on 'The Showering'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 4 years ago
Present tense?

Just terrible.

AMerryman 2.0

AnonymousAnonymousabout 4 years ago
Wait

I thought the author said this was mature content. Nothing mature about this.

26thNC26thNCabout 4 years ago
Not ready

You were not quite ready for your first story. Better luck next time.

KingBandorKingBandorabout 4 years ago

So was that somebody else's wife he was porking? If not, maybe should have been in Erotic Couplings.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 4 years ago
This story..

Was fun, I liked it!

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