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Click hereLily immediately perked up at that... she loved the idea! "Oh baby, that sounds amazing, let's do it! I can't wait to get you alone for more than just a few hours!! Where should we go, though? We can't go too far, and the weather is starting to turn colder around here. Do you have anyplace in mind?"
Dante grinned, having the perfect place in mind. "How about I take us to New Orleans? It will be warm if not hot, the food and culture should be fantastic and there are a lot of amazing hotels and resorts down there. We can see Bourbon Street, some of the cool old bars and restaurants, and stuff ourselves with amazing food and drink. We can spend a morning or two drinking chicory coffee and eating sugar-powdered beignets at Cafe Du Monde."
Lily was giddy with excitement and anticipation at the trip. "That sounds amazing baby, I can't wait! We can fly out tomorrow afternoon and spend tomorrow night, Saturday and Sunday there, and fly back Monday evening!" Lily and Dante contacted Mom and Dad through the bond since it was still early enough in the evening and brought up their idea, asking for tomorrow afternoon and Monday off. After working out the details and delegating a few duties, it was agreed they would be taking some time off.
Dante had plenty of money saved away and he now had a stipend coming in as Alpha Heir from the Pack, plus Lily's fortune and stipend. He wanted to do this weekend right, with the best he could set up for them. He got on his system and he and Lily started searching for where to stay. Dante picked out the best and booked 3 nights at the Ritz-Carlton New Orleans in the Maison Orleans Suite. He set up a couples massage in their spa for the afternoon after they landed to relax them after the travel and flight, before they would head out to dinner. He had Lily set up for a spa day starting late the next morning to pamper her some more. They quickly booked a pair of First Class tickets round trip on a United Airlines flight leaving in the late morning from Glacier Park International Airport and landing in New Orleans at 3pm local time. They spent the rest of the evening packing and getting ready to leave the next morning. Lily even packed a special outfit for a surprise for her mate while they were down there.
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Really good story, some people may think it’s ‘boring’ but I don’t. I took a 2 week Greek of this story because it was getting a little boring and now I am reading it again and love it.
I’m still having a bit of trouble getting into this story. Dialogue is better but still stiff and the plot is taking forever to develop. Truthfully it’s kind of reminding me of reading Stephen King (minus the obvious godhood.) With the books of his that I have read, the first few chapters excitement ensues but then they are promptly followed by seemingly endless boring build up until, finally, reaching the last few chapters where the climax makes it all worth it. As much issue as I am having with your story, I am really hoping it will pick up eventually and make all this effort worth it.
In the end it’s your story to write and enjoy creating; us readers are all just white noise.
You are such a joke. You actually responded with a "you'd crap on a hobo's piece of toast." You've proven your lack of maturity.
You ARE NOT LISTENING to the readers and keep plowing along with a piece of garbage story with no meat, no bones, no filling, nada!
Why do you continue? Because you are one of those types of ghouls that get off on hearing yourself speak and putting trash out there so that you can puff up your chest and say, "I did it!" Neener neener...good lord, go join trump in his teenage rage tweets
Can you explain to me your thoughts on why this is such a compelling story maybe I'm remiss in my thinking and need outside prospective? What characters grip you enough to invest stock in their development through the story? Why does the plot hold your attention? How deep is the character interactions with one another from your stand point? Like I said maybe I'm remiss it's not about the story pleasing me I've read amazing literature here that has made me cringe at times. It's the lack of respect for ones audience the blatant disregard for ones own creation that is an issue here.The fact that every "chapter" reads like he wrote it 5 minutes before posting it is what I take issue with. But to each their own ones own thoughts are just that. You are right in your stand point why comment I'll tell you why because I'm tired of simply seeing it. If I could delete this story from coming up in the nonhuman tab for me I would.
DI that was a great chapter. Really enjoyed it. Anon, go read some other story if this story doesn't please you.