All Comments on 'The Silver Guardian Bk. 01 Ch. 32'

The whole prophecy thing was pretty good. The way that things go from this point forward will be interesting to see. So on with the show as people say 😊.

Though it was a long build up, 29 chapters worth, it was worth it. Now the story is really getting interesting. I suspected early on he was royal blood. But didn't have any clue how or why. Now we know! Great Job!

DJ

Since beginning this tale the quality of your writing has improved markedly. The last 5 or so chapters had much better pace and flow. I was considering if I should continue to read this story around chapter 20. I felt though your descriptive writing was okay the story was beginning to feel stale and the story lacked pace. However I'm glad I persevered as it shows much more promise now.

Well done to you and your editor.

As others have suggested you were lost in fine detail.

I skipped 3 chapters but am pleased I returned ZA0rPk

The plot is back on track