by PastPresentFuture
Interesting permise of incest..... Well written and told. I could dl without the cheating aspect though....
Nicely done; I doubt I’m the only reader awaiting the next chapter(s)
I must say the speed with which you transformed Kimmy’s persona from ( at least from my pint of view) a sociopath birch to - I’m not sure exactly what yet- was masterful.
Loved this! The first chapter was good but this was an upgrade in every way. Eagerly anticipating the next chapter.
Enjoying your story immensely! Upon learning of the pending Chapter 3, delighted my senses. On to Chapter 3!
That was fantastic. I was thrilled to learn of a 3rd chapter. Looking forward to it.
One critique. Step-siblings would be if Ashley had a child with a man before having the twins with Ansel's deceased father. The twins are his half-siblings as they all share the same father.