All Comments on 'The Siren Scent Pt. 02'

by Charles_Bovary

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Gregorius_LightmouthGregorius_Lightmouthalmost 4 years ago

Really enjoyable, a few things were a bit too rushed and needed some fleshing out though. I'm looking forward to the next chapter nevertheless!

johsunjohsunover 3 years ago

Good story, or I should say, still a good story after the second read. Is there a third chapter coming? Perhaps trouble on Frontier 4 that our quartet of misfits needs to address? Will Diego find HIS love interest? What about the 'Queen', maybe Colin will end up with a third wife?

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

Being a science fiction fan, I really enjoyed this story. Nice job. Thanks.

AnonymousAnonymous9 days ago

It really needs another chapter. Sorry to say with out it only a 4star general for this. A long term question how the hell does anyone man think they satisfy two highly erotic women forever?

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