All Comments on 'The Sister Chronicles'

This is so bad

awesome story, great build up. Waiting to see what the next step brings

Oooh! I need a 2nd part… love it. The build up… the anticipation… keep writing. Watching this space

Chapter 2? Please :)

loved it I hope he gets to make her cum

the scribbler is indeed mad... and the text... unparseable.

This is great! One thing seemed slightly off: "I knew I shouldn't but I was curious about what her room looked like, a cute little girl like her with such a filthy mouth. I just had to find out." They'd lived in the same house for their whole lives and he hadn't seen the inside of her ... room? But I'm all for suspension of disbelief, so no real issue here. And the parent's note was priceless!! I hope there is follow up on this so we get deeper into "the plot" :-)

Wow excellent... Darby A-t-elle léchée le sperme au sol.?

Est-ce que Darby se fera baiser dur pour du beaucoup de cum sur son visage et bubble butt terrible... Invitez, faites danser et Broyez cette soeur petite comme elle le mérite et cum partout..

Love it ! Part 2 please

YOU BETTER HAVE A PART 2 TO THIS!!! Or I'll make sure the Cherry business gets shut down (lol)!!!!

Meh...so lame. 😒 The dude knows that Darby is getting off on his cum, but he's too stupid to approach her about taking it to the next level. I guess that he prefers Rosie Palm to real pussy. 2/5

5/5 More! Good start, needs another installment, pick-up right where he bumped the wall but from her point of view, the cherry drawing and what comes next.

Really enjoyed it,,,,,,just about to read par two when my wife goes out shopping,, thanks