All Comments on 'The Sisters Ch. 01'

This man is a stalker and should be arrested

Great start. My only little niggle is I don't like short intro stories. I'd rather the author submit the whole thing or at least a fair chunk. I find these "teaser" sumbissions a bit unfair on the reader. Plenty of scope for a good story though. As for YET ANOTHER person condemning a nonconsent story...dear anonymous...get a life...if you don't like nonconsent then here is a radical idea..buggar off and don't read it! If you want something constructive to do go and give a "1" to my stories. I write under "WYATT". Cheers again Rockstar for a good start.

your story is starting out slow but that is ok. keep writing and add more detail. You can never have too much detail