All Comments on 'The Sisters Next Door'

Good premise.

But almost the entire story is introductory. Needs MUCH more in the way of details of the sexual encounter with Katie.

He was enjoying playing with her tits. Why did she have to stop him? Why not tease him with them? Why not have her get as much out of the tit playing as he was? Pehaps even a little titty fucking.

Her bottom never comes off? Why? Why not have him play with her pussy while she was playing with his cock. With some dialog between them during the playing.

Four stars, but only because I'm feeling generous, and believe there's more of this story to come.

Aside from needing some editing, hot fun story.

I like the way you’ve introduced us to the two girls.

Feels like a lot of teasing! Hope you keep going with this and we get a bit more payoff and reward

But otherwise, keep it up, looking forward for chapter two

Hot topic, quick fun read, BUT it could have been so much better! More character development on both sisters, more detailed description of play with older sister, more dialog. Would’ve rated this a 3, 4 at most, but gave you the 5 because it reminded me of a real incident I had with an older girl. Keep writing!

Enjoyed but really want to get to some sex scenes with the sisters

Super! Five stars. Great start to a series that I hope will come soon . . .

super nice start! waiting for part 2!!!

Fantastic start. Looking forward to more!

Need another chapter or two!

Great story and good writing but LOTS of spelling mistakes and typos. IE cars have brakes not breaks.

A den of desires and sex. Too late Mark, you can't leave now, even if you wanted to.

Her lips, my wood, words that fit together like....