All Comments on 'The Sisters of Terror'

This is an interesting idea, but wow, it comes out of nowhere and ends just as abruptly. It is more the summary to a story than a full story. That, or a nightmare that doesn't have to make sense. It honestly had a "Freddy" quality to the set up, the protagonist didn't question a lot, just went along with it.

Slow down, build more atmosphere! There is potential here to give the reader the chills knowing something weird is going to happen and the nuns are not "all there" with their pious mumblings. If done with a slower and creepier build in tension, as well as more time spent on the altar and the climax, you could put this in Erotic Horror. :)

Catches your attention. Will the next chapter have some back ground? Thank you.

Thank you for leaving your thoughts about my story. It is much appreciated and i have taken on board what you said.

This tale was a pleasant surprise. Very well done. How would she survive and what will her child become? More please!