All Comments on 'The Sixth Floor Ch. 02'

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AnonymousAnonymous6 months ago

Good premise continues.

Sex is too automatic. Too mechanical. No tension.

No description of her breasts? Huge? Big? Small?

No real nipple action.

Not a word from her about whether she likes what's happening.

Not a word from her about whether she wants more. Harder? Softer? Faster? Slower?

She sucks his cock but never uses her hands on cock or balls?

Three stars.

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I am interested in the internal and external narratives that we create. The intersection between the divine and the profane. College history professor who likes to explore hidden desires and secrets.

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