by BlaQQuill
I'm a bit confused. It seems like he is developing an earth core. How is he supposed to heal Alena's mana pathways if he doesn't develop a healing core?
My MANA pathway is not developed. Not knowing what happens next is driving me crazy. I do not want to wait 100s of cycles...
If only if was possible to impart more knowledge on a weekly basis instead of just the 2 pages
Absolutely amazing!! Every time I read a chapter I become so “involved” that I lose track of time and what is going on around me until I get to the end. Then I wish that the next chapter was there for me to read. And now I have to wait an entire week to get my next “fix.” Thank you for this opportunity to experience another reality so vividly. ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️
Every week I am always on the edge wanting more
Great story and am happy it is without too much sex.
Excellent chapter. Lot of story building and answers to questions. Can’t wait to see how he comes out of this experience whether it will change him or not. Can’t wait for the next chapter. Keep up the good work.
Argg! The biggest cliff-hangar yet! I wish I had Greg's affinity for earth magic so I was not so greatly affected by 'cliff'-hangers...
How dare you not be done with the story yet!! (/s)
Please go back in time and start writing earlier. It was so thrilling to see how much you had already written so I didn’t have to wait each week for a new chapter, but so disappointing to come to the end of it!!
Alas, relegated to the queue like all the other readers….so sad!
First time I've commented in the 10ish years I've used this site. Your ability to make the words real is astounding. I feel like im watching a movie reading your writing. Amazing story. I just wish I didn't read so fast, I've read all the chapters in a few days. Also, it's amazing how you are able to write so much, so consistently. Thank you, from an avid reader.
Great chapter.
Slightly stretches disbelief for MC to be a genius over the ancient researcher in her own field of expertise, a little Mary Sue ish, but main characters do that sometimes.