All Comments on 'The Skipper'

Nice story but... Look you write nice stories. Nothing wrong with heroes and white knights in armour etc. But you tend to overdo it a little (in my humble opinion). Take this story for example. We have a girl that is on course to win the championship. You won't get there without knowing your ship from inside out. Yet, your heroe takes over in his first 5 minutes sailing and make her perform better. Come on, that's just to much (I have been competitive in the Flying Dutchman class myself). Personally I think that if you would make your heroes a a little less "overwhelming" your stories would be better.

Best regards

Evert

A little setup that seems not too plausible, and fairly routine descriptions of sexual activities.

In addition, there are spelling and punctuation errors (finishing "forth" is an abstract concept; "fourth" is more likely), and the lack of contractions make the characters sound like Commander Data.

My advice: seek out a good editor. Good idea; only fair execution.

I agree with the other 2 comments. Potential, but not reached.

Lukas

Another great and loving story Susan thought if she confessed her past doings he would leave her but Ted didnt care about her past just hope the past doesnt come knocking on there door Then Ted will think before he says anything .

A simple story, well told. It hit me just right. I was ready to give it a six or seven!

Thank you for sharing it.

There is more for them to go through and be happy -

But is was sweet and simple - Love today over rules past issues - a generally valid concept -

To short but good.

A very nice story! Thanks for Sharing!

Rushed, poor development, far-fetched - maybe belongs in fantasy category. Interesting concept, but a writing disaster....