All Comments on 'The Slave Contract'

Welcome to Literotica. This is very hot. I hope we hear more of Lynna's adventures with her roommates. And that all five of them get actively involved.

Thank you! I actually do have a second chapter written and a third one planned, but for the moment they're not on literotica. I am sure they'll find their way here sooner or later.

Well that devolved quickly.

Do you think so? I personally think the story worked rather well but hey, you're welcome to your opinion on that. It would have been a bit more helpful if you had told me where you felt it went wrong, though. That way I could have looked at it and honestly considered whether whatever you took issue with was actually a mistake. Telling me that something was wrong, but not what it was, is not exactly helpful, you know?

This is a fantastic story and can’t wait to see it develop!

What a fun premise. Other stories like this delight in having the women forced into the situation completely against their will. You have the sensitivity to have her interested and willing from the start. Looking forward to the next chapters.

Thank you both SyleusSnow and to anonymous. I think this story has at least one more chapter to it, but it will be a while because I am also working om commissioned stuff that I can't really set aside at the moment.

In regards to Lynna being willingly involved in all of this, yeah. It's a bit of a pet peeve of mine that so few stories have the female character both enjoy this sort of thing and participate willingly. Back when I started, I was more typical in my writing but nowadays I try to be a bit more sensitive when it comes to issues with fantasies of nonconsent. I think it's more fun to play around with the idea of different kinds of consent, or how someone might have a fantasy, like Lynna does here, but who knows the difference between that and reality.

Take this story for instance. Lynna has fantasies of being used, being forced to submit to a powerful master who can do whatever they want to her. But she wouldn't really do that if someone actually tried out of the blue. By playing her game with Michael she was able to live out that fantasy without actually putting herself into that position.

You can probably argue that she was unwise to jump to it so quickly, and that Michael really did have the potential to mess with her if he'd been less than good. (If he'd actually allowed the email to be sent!) In fact, I am probably going to try and address a bit of that next chapter.

more please

we definitely need more about Lynna's adventures as a slave

I am glad you think so! I actually have a second chapter working its way through submission now. It should hopefully be out in a day or two.

Nice beginning!

I loved the premise and the stories. I would love to be one of your slaves in the. Near future!

Great dialogue. Nice mix of characters. Five star plus!

This would be amazing to have happen. I can’t wait to read more!

They should shave her pussy completely