All Comments on 'The Slaver's Girl Pt. 01'

Can't wait for more. Oh I'd love to be fucked senseless alongside her, what would you do to me?

Part 2 is still in pending status. Please have patience. I assure you that this 2nd chapter is longer and more satisfying (well in my POV it is. lol).

And you are missing entire words in your sentences. Does no one edit anymore?

I really enjoyed this. Good start, decent concept. But definitely edit! The mistakes ruin what would have been a well flowing story. Keep writing though, it can only make it better!

As a first time writer the comments in here are encouraging. I will get in touch with a volunteer editor so that I can properly present my work to all of you guys. I apologize in advance if the 3rd chapter will take time to be submitted. I will focus on correcting the first two chapters for now.

Keep up the great work