All Comments on 'The Sleep Over'

When it got down to the sex, it was pretty hot. I liked when she was rubbing her cock along his ass crack and then she shoved it right into him. There were a lot of spelling errors though, and as good as the sex parts were, they were a bit rushed. Hope to see another one though...like I said, it's got potential, just needs some work.

The sex was too quick, elaborate on it more next time (and I do hope there's a next time).

Loved it

xoxo,

Di

Good to read a non-bin story with some romance