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by juanstalvern00982

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SmellypigSmellypigover 4 years ago

Hi, the beggining of your story is quite similar to my "The Smelliest Couple", and I really don't care, as long as you're taking it to some unhygienic smelly unwashed sex, as you did. So I hope you keep writing as it's rare to find mysophilic erotica.

bigothboybigothboyover 3 years ago
Awesome - But Watch The Hums!

This is an amazingly hot story, really sexy and nasty and hit all the right buttons.

BUT - stop using 'hummed' - it appears 10 times on one page alone, and people do not hum words in real life :P It really took me out of the story.

That aside, awesome work - best of luck in future endevours!

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

I keep noticing people say you use hummed a lot but I have not noticed that at all.

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Imagine a filth kink writer who decides to add in deep and consistent lore, power building and histories and backstories to stories about women getting off on rolling in all sorts of nasty muck. You have a decent idea of how I like to write now.