All Comments on 'The Smithton Tapes Pt. 01'

This seems to hold some interesting promise. A really good start even if a little more proof reading is needed in places. Things that 'Spill-chuckers' don't pick up. Also things that Grammarly will miss too. Things like 'on' where you probably meant 'one'. Really small details like that will tend to jar for the reader.

Keep up the good work.

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