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chytownchytownover 3 years ago
Nice Start***

An editor would help with the presentation of your story and future chapters. Thanks for sharing.

SuriThinksSuriThinksover 3 years agoAuthor

Thanks Chytown. I'm looking for one.

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I am a writer and create stories around the super-hot girl and ugly guy fantasy. I prefer romantic and passionate stories.