All Comments on 'The Soft Sub'

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Your habit of switching from present to past tense is extremely annoying. Also, punctuation is there for a reason. Learn to use it.

Good story.

...but really needs an editor. The many misspellings and incorrect word usages kept pulling me out of your story. I liked it, though.

he's an inventive,controlling and caring master,she's such a lucky woman. please tell me more,as i try not to cum...

God I wish i was her!! lol please keep writing!! this story is simply orgasmic!