All Comments on 'The Spa Ch. 01'

This has the makings of a very interesting series. I am keen to follow Dani's experiences in her new life.

First of your writing read. Thanks for background; looking forward to Dani’s new position/adventure.

Nice start. Sets the scene. I was in my late teens when women only gyms started springing up. Pictures of fit, hot women in tight shorts or leotards fuelled my lesbian themed thoughts as to what happened inside when it was quiet!! Horny lesbian instructors seducing younger girls in the showers!!! The manageress slipping her hand inside a new instructors panties in the office during the very personal interview. I hope I've given you some other ideas for your story!!!

wow good start so looking forward to reading more

This promises much

We will be waiting to read more, please.