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All Comments on 'The Special Millionaire Chemical Pt. 05'

by mountian299

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago
Really?

Drivel to say the least. You have been told from you start to get a proof reader and failed to do so. Stop wasting our time and your time!

g912493g912493about 9 years ago
Proof Reader / Editor !!!!!!!!

As others have said, you really need someone to proof read you stuff.

mountian299mountian299about 9 years agoAuthor
finally have and editor

Finding an editor is not as easy as you may think but luckily I have got one but will not show up until the later parts of this novel.

Syrbulldog69Syrbulldog69over 2 years ago

Not bad story Plots. Terrible grammar and spell check. Almost makes it necessary to reread every third sentence for understanding of Intent.

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First time writing one of these. Enjoy writing stories which always turn out as novels. Long winded I guess. I am retired from transportation industry. My early works are filled with errors miss spelling and poor paragraph formation. I tend to concentrate on the story more tha...