All Comments on 'The Spell - Family Ties Ch. 02'

by RGArrow

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photokenphotoken6 months ago

The Spell stories are very creative . I am enjoying them!

Thank you for a great story

photoken

jaythemanjaytheman6 months ago

Just started reading this series and am enjoying it very much. I never check sci fi. Please continue. This is much more fun than the usual e&v.

AnonymousAnonymous6 months ago

...You really need to learn when you should be using periods. There are far too many comma splices in this story.

AnonymousAnonymous3 months ago

The Spell should take off like wildfire after Edna publishes her findings. It's the cure for cancer. Given the choice between conventional treatment, and an overnight cure that just costs me the ability to wear clothes? Shake my hand, please.

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