All Comments on 'The Spoils of War Ch. 01'

Great start Aim. Can't wait for next chapter.

5/5

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Apologies for the shameless plug but you can find several more chapters of this story, as well as plenty of other never before seen stories, on my Patreon. Also, I've done a lot of art for this story there too! Thank you so much for giving my first fantasy story a try!

Ised2bjustj: thank you so much! I've been so anxious to see what the reception to this story would be! So glad you liked it!

Forgot to mention! This story was edited by Chiefhal. He is the first voluntary editor I've used in forever! He was great. So big thanks to him!

Intrigued as to where you're going but a good start?

Ravey: thank you?

Although this is different than what you normally do I still enjoyed this story. I can't wait to see this sorceress. 5/5 *

Anonymous: thank you. This is definitely different than anything I've tried before. Thank you for giving it a chance!

Great story so far! Cant wait to read more ✌️

HI AE,

I've been a bit busy lately and just read your story today.

I like the start, feeling the story will be quite interesting. I have not read any SCI-FI stories on LIT, so am not an expert. But, I certainly enjoyed the introduction and look forward to reading more chapters, and then commenting again.💐

Cheers,

Absolutely fantastic chapter and the story itself is wonderful ..... this was a great read and the character description of each, important protagonist or even the two hostile countries and their political economic alignments, sensationally written .... The next part will definitely be exciting

🔫🔫🔫🔫🔫🔫🔫🔫🔫🔫✨☘️ ten guns or five stars