All Comments on 'The Spur Ch. 11'

I happily granted five stars for this chapter. The preceding one left me indifferent until Grasshopper, like Jamilia I also think this awful name that should have been forgotten along with the Karate Kid, was made a gift for the weekend. This was a long weekend and we only experienced the first morning. I knew when I saw Steve's Journal we had been short changed.

My complaint is made because you did a great job with the help from MyCaptain that I was hoping for more. Still, we are all indebted for what we have been given by you. Looking forward to the next bit of adventure for these two.