All Comments on 'The Spur Ch. 17-18'

Interesting. It touches on the intrinsic truth about BDSM but didn’t explore it. The real power in BDSM belongs to the sub. When they use the safe so, the scene ends, not before. A dominant isn’t all powerful or perfect, they shouldn’t try to be. Afterall, the sub chose them, accepted them.

As soon as there was mention of the out of state car things were pretty clear Jamila would be having an issue with Doug but the brevity of how the loss occurred for such an interesting character is disappointing. I am still having a hard time with the staccato delivery of this story. To me it lacks fluidity.

Jill has every right to be furious. Her explanation of their relationship should be a wake up call. It is time to remover her collar as she is about to become Steve's parent/caregiver in this relationship.

Thanks, Whackdoodle; that's what i had in mind.