All Comments on 'The Stable Ch. 01'

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HTW2HTW2about 7 years ago
Don't bother reading - never finished the story

This story line is ALL over the place. Never made any sense what so ever. I'm actually glad it was never finished.

emj417emj417about 11 years ago
just maybe...

Lissette turns Brent out--please don't let him be a pimp.

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago

great so he was stalking her to turn her into a hooker?

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
Great start !

I liked this first chapter . Can't wait to read more .

hisangelbeautyhisangelbeautyover 11 years ago
confused

nice start but I am confused, judging by the title I think i know where this is going, I will wait to see what happens next because i have a feeling it is going to be good.

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
I'm loving this

Can't wait to read more!

ariesgirlariesgirlover 11 years ago

Wht the hell! So that was a setup?

MADISONKAIMADISONKAIover 11 years ago
WOW

This is different....can't wait to read the next chapter. I liked the cliffhanger chapter ending. I am curious as to who this dude is.

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