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AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Good premise.

But lacks details.

Particularly needed dialog during the sex scenes. Oh, I like that. You like that? How about this? Yes. Should I do it faster? Slower? Harder? Softer?

And so on.

Four stars.

JustplainjeffJustplainjeffover 1 year ago

Details, shmetails, this hit all the right spots. Another chapter, maybe? 5 stars, without hesitation.

MikeOrMikeyMikeOrMikeyover 1 year ago

5 Stars. Please continue.

Demosthenes384bcDemosthenes384bcover 1 year ago

I like the main story arc, but a little confused as you highlighted the passing years you mentioned "marriage", but it never comes up again. Was he married? Was she? You said "partner" - is she gay/bi? Too many crumbs for a perfect score - 4*

jessicaravenjessicaravenabout 4 hours ago

Loved the premise of your story, great reading.

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Just a guy who likes to write erotic stories, some I publish some I don't. I'm addicted to the joys of women and, very occasionally, men. I have to confess that, when the temptation comes my way, which is rarely these days, I'll happily go beyond the written word.

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