All Comments on 'The Story of Odile Pt. 01'

Wow! I love the way you use your words with emotion, elegance, and precision, each one placed specifically to evoke our response. I’m eagerly awaiting your next submission. Thank you for sharing your talents with us.

Your story held me emotionally, not as the girl described, but as an observer of her emotions, her doubts, her fears I felt her uncertainty mixed with her determination to please him, confused then pleased with the emotions he stirred within her. Your words and phrasing are captivating. I love your writing style. I will read more now.

I give it a five. Incredible, captivating.

What can I say but thank you?

I can promise further episodes.

This author's pen is skilled and lyrical with eroticism. More than the fucking scenes per se, I love to read (and write, for that matter) inside the sub's head in the act, or process, of submitting.

Eager for more. Thank u, DC.

That said, I'm not fond of how every time aodile speaks, it's in a stammer. I think she can calm down at some point.