All Comments on 'The Story of Sarah Ch. 01'

Looks promising - let's see what 02 brings....

Lukas

I found the story trite and dull, indeed I couldn't read all of it.

Please don't make us suffer through any more of this

that is going to take a real stretch

Honestly, when I wrote this story, it wasn't meant as an incest story. I thought, given the site guidelines, that explaining the time prior to Sarah's 18th birthday might qualify as "taboo".

This probably should have been in another category altogether.

I'll see if it moves or stays. I have already crafted a way to make it fit this category if it stays. Thanks for the feedback so far.

I quite liked it. Bring on Chapter 2! If you don't like it, simply don't read it, but there are those of us who don't think it's trite and dull.

If you thought this was "trite or dull and indeed" couldnt finish it all, well perhaps your literary interests are in want of some broadening. This was well written and actually rather romantic. i am not so interested in hearing about their "current" affair but i would like to know about the unusual request.

i agree that if you didnt like it, simply state that fact, there is no need to be rude. how would you feel if it had been your piece.