All Comments on 'The Striper Made Me Do It'

Having actually read the story, I assume the title is a typo.

I found the story enjoyable, actually. Although it did have this breathless quality, as if the the author was really excited and telling it as fast as possible, it had a very good theme and a nice presentation. I would have liked a more paused and, well, intimate rendition of the story. Erotica is about sex, and good sex is typically the kind that lasts (although, of course there are exceptions ;) ). In that sense, a good erotic story is one that mirrors the passion, the intimacy and the binding of personae that is the essence of good sex. Which is why I enjoyed your story, and hope that in future renditions, you might coax your pen into being a bit less shy and take it's time.