All Comments on 'The Sublime Heat'

Why did you write in second person? Do you even know what that is? It is awkward and annoying; don't do it.

Short, simple, hot as hell! Love it! ;)

Very poetic prose. I found the point of view a bit off-putting. First and a half person? Interesting but ultimately distracting.

Loved it....the point of view was just fine.

It didn't take away from anything....I loved the tension.

Can't wait to read more!

first you were so slow,sensual and gentle in your words and suddenly it turned to fast,rough and lustful sex.The pace changed so fast that didnt feel good.The starting was great.