All Comments on 'The Suburban Mom Pt. 05'

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Dingbatwizard 10 months ago

This is a beautifully crafted chapter. There is everything: sensuality, suspense, surprise and humor.

More please! 5

Sevendafordaveal 10 months ago

What a lovely description of one woman’s initiation into the joys of forbidden love!

Pappasleaze 10 months ago

Not the best chapter but I still liked it. I still believe that she should receive less thank she gets. I do believe that is where she is heading now with the liking of Vesna's back door, it will give her more in her arsenal for her other adventures Thanks for sharing

Bodswood 10 months ago

Steamy and HOT!!!

Anton79 10 months ago

Very nice!

The_Veil_of_Isis 10 months agoAuthor

Oh, Pappasleaze, give a girl a break, please!

Ambul 10 months ago

Wow! I hope Marcia’s adventures are just beginning.

FarmerRon1955 10 months ago

Another excellent story my dear!!! Once again, I gave it 5 stars......and again, if I could've given it more than 5, I would have!

liz33nd 10 months ago

sexy writing for sure

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