All Comments on 'The Suburban Mom'

What a stunning debut! I hope you will write more.

Excellent story. Hope it continues.

Oh, yes, you really need to keep writing... An extension to this story, perhaps

Thank you for your nice comments. I will make a series of this. I haven’t finished writing it yet, so who knows where it may go :) xxx

Sooo hot! Can’t wait for more. You rock!

I actually like this. I do have one problem with it though, I feel like I need a journal to keep up with the many character we were give here as well as their information. I do love that there are two women wanting to spend time with Marcia. will she become the community lesbian? maybe even a submissive one? Can't wait to see what happens. Thanks for sharing.

i thought this was so creative and exciting. great start and four stars

4 stars?! I’d give it 10 if I could!

Gotta agree with Pappa-a lot of characters...

and no real physical description of Marcia., at least yet

and hubby's prong gave her a to-the moon big O-!...when they fucked

and two rugmunchers gaydar pinged when they saw her

convoluted story line so far..interesting enough to keep going for now...curious who it is that rogered her rump in Ch 5...her first buttfuck? seems doubtful, but time will tell...

Great Start! Can’t wait to read the whole series!