All Comments on 'The Succbus' Milky Bounty'

Apologies for misspelling the title. A bit embarrassing for my first story, but I’ve resubmitted it to have it changed. Thanks for reading!

Great story, but it would have been even better if you had used a romantic seduction to start with instead of some weird legal right premise..... 4/5 for the weird premise, otherwise it was a terrific story.

I like this one. I think the legal stuff added to the feeling of helplessness…the feeling of being forced added to the excitement for me. Looking forward to the next chapter

Legal impositions on a woman's bodily autonomy calls to mind a recent Supreme Court ruling.

That said, this was a fun read. Apart from errant apostrophes, my only major critique is there should be a paragraph break when the speaker changes.

Can't wait for more!