All Comments on 'The Succubi's Surrogate'

I think this story has a lot of potential and I'd love to see a second chapter

oh yes more to read would be awesome . thanks

Continue, I want to read more, much more

Please keep on going with this

Best regards

if they have both parts they are not shemale no need for the tag

Omnibus, or incubus. Neither are a succubus. Succubi are all female parts just as incubi are all male parts. Best of both worlds are omnibi having both sets of genitals and most often nice breasts. Story could be interesting, but it felt way too rushed and sparse on details. If you do continue the story, please flesh out the characters a little. Show off the personalities that you hinted at. It's a fair start to what could be a great story.

this has been a fantasy since I was first jerk ingredients off... more more

Cool please keep up the good work, that is a fantasy of mine to be seduced by a Succubi's and get the best of both worlds lol

This needs more parts.

Cute. They seem like "nice" succubi, the kind you can bring home to mother. Best of luck trying to explain the preggo belly.

Cute. I'll definitely read more