All Comments on 'The Succubus'

For those who don't know, "evexy" was the word used by Bruce Campbell to describe Tricia Helfer's character in Burn Notice.

I absolutely loved the reference to Burn Notice. I LOVED that show except for the final season. The finale was okay, or possibly a little bit better than okay. 👌 But the show took a turn towards the end with everyone on the run that really made it less interesting. It was almost like they had fired all of the original writers and hired a new crew who were terrible at their job.

So far as Bruce Campbell goes, I haven't seen anything that he appeared in that I didn't enjoy. I prefer when he plays the lead, but secondary roles are very entertaining too. I get the impression that he's probably an arrogant asshole in real life, but I love his acting!!!

Creepy and weird with incorrect use after use of colon and semi-colon.

Regarding the semi-colons and colons, I would argue at least half to two thirds are definitely used correctly or in a permissible manner. However, I have been told I make excessive use of semicolons, so...

Thank you for confirming my suspicions that even for weirdos (you kinda have to be to even be interested in reading this), I am especially weird!

Fantastic and terrifying. Excellent use of sexy body horror

Thank you very much, the_leaky_pen. If you liked this story, then you may like Left Hand Harrison's "Demonette". It has quite unique body horror, though not violent. You can find it on mcstories.com: https://mcstories.com/Demonette/index.html. I especially recommend Part 3 if you are interested solely in the body horror, though Part 1 has a little as well.

Lackluster writing with no soul. Meh.