All Comments on 'The Succubus Ch. 01'

Damn, this story is the real deal! It's really intense, thanks!

That was an amazing first chapter...! It was lusting, erotic and taboo laden, though it was also well written, deep and well thought out... Enjoyable for more than just Sexual. It makes you dig your own mind for your own dirt to imagine...

Im very interested in all of these, except the sister thing,

Love this, can't wait to read the next chapter if your willing to write it!

asap pls

please we want to hear more

Despite the range of this submission, I find myself wondering how a "nobody" like the main character would be able to accomplish such an erotic feat, especially considering the amount of range that this story gives him. Also, would Maya visit in-between encounters, to encourage him on and assist him in any number of salacious ways?

I can't wait for you to continue this story

Keeping making more, I love it so far! It's well written and well paced.

Looking forward to part 2!

This is great start with promise of much to cum!

The gripe of 'formulaic' is irrelevant if not ignorant, as these stories will certainly have some similar roots. But you have lain a great groundwork for a very arousing series. Bring it on!

Love the story so far. I have been waiting in anticipation. I want to know how the "milk" is going to work the ladies over.

PART TWO PLEASE!!

never let it end instead let it go on forever

I like where this is going. It looks very promising.

brilliant!! i want more!!

I am very excited to read the cumming chapters.

very formulaic, and as a result very boring

Really looking forward to reading more.