All Comments on 'The Succubus Queen'

The end was fantastic, the meter devine!

I gave you five stars in a shiny gold line.

A fun story I admit

But now I must sit

And wait for the day

Which for I do pray

A headset adventure

Part 2 the thirst quencher

I liked when he drinked their cum

For this rhyme is done and I cba writing any more rhymes epic story kinda hope it's true ngl.

Interesting enough. Hey, we ever gonna see another chapter to Healslut?

An interesting story

I liked it just fine.

Better than most,

I read all the lines.

But now I must wait,

A year at the least,

To test my mettle

To avoid being a feast.

Your Succubus Queen

Will return, so she said,

And the end of our battle

Will see one of us dead.