All Comments on 'The Summer After Freshman Year'

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mytimetobehappymytimetobehappyabout 1 year ago

very enjoyable, looking for more chapters. dont you think that after all this they could be on a first name basis?

ClevercheddarClevercheddar11 months ago

Really injoying this keep up the good work

AnonymousAnonymous7 months ago

Not terrible, but waaaaay too repetitive. It's basically just the same lines over and over and over again. And I get the teacher fantasy thing, but saying 'Mrs. Robinson' and 'Ms. Rhodes' that much just got annoying by the end. An editor would be a good thing as well.

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