All Comments on 'The Summer of the Garden Boys'

It was well written and descriptive. I really like the characters and would love to see some more action, maybe a group thing or two. Very hot.

PS- Watch for typos. Just a suggestions.

mmm mm! loved the setting and the characters reminds me of my days in the country side thanks for the memories ;)

You write as if you're writing down your memories. It's nostalgic of a time long ago in the countryside, very "Wonder Years" with an adult/erotic twist. Descriptive, sensual, detailed, the only problem I had was it appears they are too young and unknowing and I prefer to read about older, complex characters. Still, very nicely done.

This story was even better after I read it again. Thanks for allowing me the opportunity to edit for you and sorry I missed a few typos!

with a rural spin for a personality of its own

I'm glad to see there's another chapter.