All Comments on 'The Swap Meet: Week 01'

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edwards21edwards21almost 12 years ago

Pretty damn good start. Couple of typos here and there, you might want to have your editor take a harder look at the next one. Definitely looking forward to the next chapter!

Scotsman69Scotsman69almost 12 years ago
Great start

Thank you

AhabscribeAhabscribealmost 12 years ago
Bravo!

A splendid start to what I suspect will be a sizzling and sexy series. Excellent narrative and dialogue. You have the twins dynamic down pat...might you be one?

Looking forward to the next!

NormCastleNormCastlealmost 12 years ago
OMG

Were it so, and were it possible to find groups like this....man the group is the cake the sister is the frosting....

ShadowlandsShadowlandsalmost 12 years ago
Looking forward to more...

Interesting start. A thoroughly good read. I am looking forward to reading more of the twins adventures..... please hurry.

nursepeternursepeteralmost 12 years ago
Awesome

Great story, look forward to it progressing some more! Love to hear about both the relationship with the sister and scotts other partners in depth :D

toslertosleralmost 12 years ago
Enjoyed your story

I liked this story so much, I went and read some of your other stories! Good work!

Gary_AlexanderGary_Alexanderalmost 12 years ago
Thanks for your kind words, and...

Chapter 2 should be online soon.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago
|A novel idea, well-written

A nice change from the usual story, a semi-humorous twist with the couple going to the sex club being siblings, not spouses.

Well-written with good pacing, one wonders (but suspects) where this is going!

rtmd30rtmd30over 6 years ago
Nice story with a very intriguing plot

I like the plot and story and am looking forward to the third installment.

Thanks for sharing them.

EnjoyBothEnjoyBothabout 4 years ago

I had read this story sometime back and glad I ran across it again. Now off to Part 2 again and more over MemberX's stories.

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