All Comments on 'The Sway'

God you have me wet again

I thought it was a guy !!!! You had me thinking it was, then to find out it was a girl!! Oh man that was good, My own sweet sub is going to get exactly that today.

Mitress Carol

Bring your ass this way girl and i'll make it sway, that was hot very very hot, my fist is clentching right now

Tina told me you had another one out already and i love it. Again you put that bloody twist in but this time. ohhhh boy, nicely done. Im passing this one onto Lynx

Maddie

Cinderella.

This is by far the best one yet. Your writing is getting better and better and i could see every step you both took. I could feel the frustration inside her and feel the need that controls her passion for her friend. Well done. i love the turned tables at the end.

Lynx

you know i love your stories. Girl on girl though you did surprise me with that one. once again Cinders you get the cats purr with the lick and hiss of contentment, Whats Next?

Pudycatt

meoooowwwww

That was fantastic Cinders, I loved it!!!!

You just keep getting better....

Thankyou,

Princess xox

This is a damned good story and clearly Cinderella's imagination, style, pacing and descriptions have gone up a cog.

Well done :-)

Nathan

Thank You all for your comments, it inspires me beyond all belief when i get great feedback.. Princess as always it is a pleasure to hear from you.. whats next did i hear in the Mist's ... ahhhhhhh plenty

With honest thanks

Cinderella of the Glass Slipper

I like it, I like it a lot, I will be watching for the sway in every woman i pass from now on

Brilliant, Cinderella, simply brilliant. I loved every moment. The pacing, the play on gender, the switching from current reality to imagined future fantasy and back again, it all worked perfectly. It was sharp, clever and definitely hot...

Lily ;-)

Sounds to me like you thoroughly researched this story and all the data was still fresh in your mind when you wrote it. LOL Took My Breath Away .......too hot.