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Rwa4768Rwa4768over 4 years ago

Hot story I look forward to reading the next chapter.

flahooley319flahooley319over 4 years ago
so fuckin' hot

This story's got it all. Incest, cum-eating, best friends, first time, can't wait to read chapter 2.

DevonCowboyDevonCowboyover 4 years ago
flahooley's right

So fuckin' hot!! 10*

goducks111goducks111over 4 years ago
wow

hot hot hot 5 stars

JustNikkiJustNikkiover 4 years ago

Minor issues aside (gf's name, fraternal twins..) it was a very hot read. Can't wait to read more.

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago

Nicely done

WeitzeWeitze5 months ago

Great start. Very readable except for several of the most common mistakes: come for cum, we for way, other simple types that proof reading should catch.

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If I wanted to put information down I would not have chosen that ridiculous name. BUT I also submit stories to storiesonline.net which has a more realistic policy about age. I also post on storiesonline.net (a more enlightened site) under the name, familylove1954.

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